I came across the Five Word Challenge: July 2015 set by David/Megan here through a challenge response. I found it interesting so here goes my post. But before you get reading, I would like for you to take a look at my previous post Music Today here to know the background story and get properly into the feel of it.
The story starts here:

I am crawling on the floor and mumma is in the kitchen, probably preparing dinner for us. I am trying to walk these days. Sometimes, I stand for a few seconds and then collapse on the floor. When mumma first saw me stand for three seconds, she nearly cried with happiness. Now, when she is free, she sits some distance away from me and tries to make me walk, holding my hand or finger till I reach her. She claps when I do. She is so pretty when she laughs. I make my way across the room to the kitchen and hug mumma’s leg. She sees me and smiles, “Niki, come on!”
She abandons her work, scoops me up in her arms and kisses me. She carries me towards the open balcony and there, some distance away, we both see the sun set gradually behind the mountain range that surrounds our small town of Phuntsholing. I see that she glances at the bridge across the valley that materializes from the dense tree cover and I know what she is thinking. She is waiting for daddy.
Suddenly the clouds rumble, a low, growling sound, that sounds very similar to what daddy makes in the bathroom when he is constipated. It comes as no surprise to mumma as it rains every other day here. I like it because she lets me play in the rain. She sets me down in my swing so that she can pick the clothes she had left out to dry.
After she is done, she carries me inside and feeds me daal and rice. It starts raining soon after. Daddy has still not come. I can see that mumma is worried. It is already dark, and the rain makes it extremely hard to drive on the curvy roads. Suddenly the bell rings. I let out a shriek of happiness and crawl-run my way to the door, where mumma is already there, with a towel for daddy to dry. Daddy looks tired as he removes his tie, but as soon as he sees me, his eyes light up and a grin makes in way. He picks me up, kisses me, and says, “Muchano,” I don’t know why he calls me that, “kaisi ho?” How are you?
I shout again and he throws me in the air. I laugh happily as he catches me. Mumma says, “Dinner is ready. I have set it in the balcony so that we can enjoy the rain too. You can also click some photographs.” She adds with a smile. She knows my father is an avid photographer; how much he loves to click my photographs and how much I love modelling for him.
Daddy takes me to the balcony and on the way, we pass the music system. “You know what, Muchano,” he says lovingly, “there is a song that I luuurve, would you hear it?” he tickles me as he says. I laugh again, as he puts on a cassette.
“Jagjit Singh,” he says grandly. “One of the finest shayars of all time.”
As they settle down for dinner, and me for a round two, I look around me and smile. This is my family, these are the people that I love. My life is not illusion, it is a reality. I am happy.
Beautiful! I admire your short stories; you have a gift. Keep on writing!
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Thank you Cynic 😀 I’m really glad you like it!
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You were such a little kid in 2000 😛 I could play football then. hehe
You guys lived in Bhutan? Did your father work there?
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Yes, I may be small, but I was cute 😛
And it’s not my fauLt that you are OLD!
Yes, my father had a job there for 3-4 years, we came in 2001.
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Do you look into the mirror and say where has all that cuteness disappeared? lol (just kidding) hehehe
Oh, that’s a place about which I haven’t heard much. Let’s see if I can visit one day.
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Sometimes lol 😛 but, I was really (x100000000) cute when I was a child. And I can’t believe you’ve never heard of Bhutan. Its just next to us 😛
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If you say so miss 🙂
Heard of Bhutan, but not many travel stories that I have read of.
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Love it. Btw I will be mailing you tonight. Regarding posts for my blog 🙂
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Sure 😀
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Akanksha, so beautifully written! And all in the photo look cute, really! ❤
I can actually picture the whole thing! 😀
I feel inspired already to do a similar post!
Thank you for sharing it with us! 🙂
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Thank you Hannah for such kind words 🙂 Yeah, I was a cute kid 😀
I look forward to your post, a lot 🙂
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You must miss Bhutan… I hear it is a beautiful place 🙂
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Well, to be honest, I don’t remember a single detail. 😉 This was all a figment of my imagination 🙂
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