Nature, nature, nature
This as our future
The sun Rises in East
And brings smiles to our cheeks
There are many reasons
For these beautiful seasons
To have this fun
Go for a walk along the setting sun
The water rises high in the sea
Which is called a tide
But have you ever wondered
The path you choose is always right?
Keep walking along the dust-laden roads
No matter where you go
And an advise for those
Who want to have this fun
Should surely bask in the sun
Hi Akanksha.. gr8 poems.. u could be a gr8 writer in d future!! Best of luck!!
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What a great poem!You are not less than a poet
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Thank you very much 🙂
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Wow great!!!!
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I LIKE
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Thank you 🙂
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Love it…. So nice… ☺
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amazing poems my friend
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thanx
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Thanks a ton Himani…. I am sure your comments will help me better my poems. 🙂
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Very Good and Marvelous Poem
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excellent poem I just love it.
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Thank you 😀
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great poem
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very beautiful poem
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Thanks Shantanu 🙂
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the poem is awsome
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Thanks Revanth 😀
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Amazing poem u will be a great writer in future
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Thanks a lot Harisimran 😀
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good
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fab poem
from esha
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Thanks esha 😊
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Hello there,
Good poem. Nothing like connecting to nature.
Hoping to read more of your works.
Cheers!
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Thanks a lot Anoop. I read your posts to and loved them. Thanks again, keep visiting 🙂
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This is soooooooo …. Sweet An Beautiful composed poem
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Thank you very much Saswati 😀
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[…] How long have you been writing? Why? I’ve been writing ever since I was in class four. I remember I wrote my first poem in Hindi for my mom who was angry with me. My first English poem was this. […]
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Good one akansha
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Thanks a lot Prayuktaa 😀
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really nice poem. that gr8. I don’t know that r u a poetess or not but if u r then go on keep it up and if u r not u have the talent to be a poetess. in future I think u r going to have a lot of success in poetry if u choose this profession………………….
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keep on writing poetry like that. that’s wonderful dude u r amazing..
I like that.
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good
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Thank you 🙂
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fantabulous. hope u will write gr8 poems in future as well!
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Very nice
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Thank you 😀
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excellent poem loved
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Thanks 😀
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Very nice poem you have composed
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Thank you 🙂
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Well I think, to become a even better poet, you should not be chidish while using the rhymes. I am very sorry to be harsh with my words. That’s the truth. It will definitely help you to become a great writer in the future. Do visit my website, incrediblepoetry.wordpress.com and comment what do you feel about my poems. Go as harsh as you can… so that I can improve my poems. Thank you..
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Well, thanks Nikesh. Constructive criticism is always welcome.
However, I would still like to bring to light the fact that I wrote this one when I was 11 and it was my very first poem. SO although, I won’t use that as an excuse for the ‘childish rhymes’, I was technically, a child.
I hope that my more recent poems are more to your liking.
Thanks again! Hope to hear more from you.
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Absolutely right. And your latest poems are indeed fascinating.
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Thank you 🙂
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Do visit my website, incrediblepoetry.wordpress.com and you to criticize and comment about my poems. Hopefully you will….
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yeah, sure, definitely 🙂
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Thank you very much..
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Looks like you have visited my website ( according to stats) thank you
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